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002. L O V E by ~eikaj:iconeikaj:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I'd speak my heart
if I knew you'd listen

I'd break the ice
if I knew you'd save me

I'd become lost
if I knew you'd find me

I'd run away
if I knew you'd chase me

I'd fall for you
if I knew you'd catch me

If only I knew what you'd do
if I told you I love you
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Love, #2 of the 100 theme challenge found on my journal [link]

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Love-noun-a profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.

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So this is my entry for LOVE. which was a bit hard because like 21 of my poems in my gallery are about love already.
so i decided to write about this...well just cause it sounded nice and everything was coming together.
I guess, I can't write a LOVE poem that well, if i'm not exactly in love.
meh.
well enjoy.

Will you chase me to the end of the world?
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~CooDy:iconCooDy: Dec 26, 2006, 10:06:38 AM
I think that not many poems would ever be written if we knew or would not love.

I hope you get to know, just take it one step at a time :)
~SimpleOona:iconSimpleOona: Dec 26, 2006, 10:07:30 AM
i think that's good, i like it.. very much. :)
good job!

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~eikaj:iconeikaj: Dec 26, 2006, 10:13:23 AM
thank you!

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eikaj
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~eikaj:iconeikaj: Dec 26, 2006, 10:16:22 AM
yeah.
man, i'm so nervous, i'm getting ready to ask a guy out that i've liked for 3 years....
i wish i knew, it'll make it so much easier.

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
~teukie:iconteukie: Dec 26, 2006, 11:17:28 AM
Omgg~ ;~; It's so pretty *faves*

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~Esqer:iconEsqer: Dec 26, 2006, 11:27:54 AM
very nice:)

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together we shall not exist - pantheist (band)
~eikaj:iconeikaj: Dec 26, 2006, 12:06:27 PM
hehe thank you!

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
~eikaj:iconeikaj: Dec 26, 2006, 12:06:31 PM
thank you!

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
~DarkOfThree:iconDarkOfThree: Dec 28, 2006, 4:32:37 PM
Gives new light for all those corny phrases ever used, eh? :) Love that. :+fav:

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