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Smoke me.

Roll your fingers
around my nipples
-like a cigarette.

Breathe in.

Suck me in
cause i am smoke
-intoxicating.

Breathe out.

Let me out
in a howling moan
-satisfaction.

Smoke me
because you want me
-because you need me.
©2008-2009 ~eikaj
:iconeikaj:

Author's Comments

Unlike cigarettes, you won't get lung cancer from me.

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Something a little different from me.
I found the comparison hilarious, and hard to sum it up in a poem. it's still in need of some reworking, but this is the gist of it.

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:iconirishxdrunk:
great stuff!

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I love bunnies and other cute animals. Seriously.
:iconbleegiimuus:
I really like this concept

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Dame, dame, dame, dame un poco de nutella ~Calle 13
:iconeikaj:
thanks!

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:iconeikaj:
orly?
lol didn't expect that from you. lol

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:iconbleegiimuus:
well, I was shocked at first and then I actually liked the comparison when I read it

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Dame, dame, dame, dame un poco de nutella ~Calle 13
:iconeikaj:
haha. shocking coming from me huh? lol

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:iconbleegiimuus:
haha exactly

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Dame, dame, dame, dame un poco de nutella ~Calle 13
:iconeikaj:
shocking for you to like it too! lol

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:iconbleegiimuus:
it's just shocking work, jackie! haha

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Dame, dame, dame, dame un poco de nutella ~Calle 13

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