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Warning by ~eikaj:iconeikaj:

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Blind eyes see nothing.
Yet, I see far more than
you ever will with your
glass eyes.

I will tell you that I see the end,
but you will not believe me.
You think that lack of vision
means I cannot have visions.

You will shoot through the sky
like lightning, golden and bright,
but your shock will only be absorbed.
Surprises don’t last long.

You will swim through
wax ponds and light
thin wicks afire;
Fury lives beneath every flame.
©2008-2009 ~eikaj
:iconeikaj:

Author's Comments

This is a small poem i can up with for my Novel.
I am participating in NaNoWriMo.org (national novel writing month) It starts November and you have 30 days to write 50 thousand words. so far i'm pretty close to 10 thousand...i'm really behind. like 7 thousand words behind. this is what i get for having a migraine and being unable to write or come up with anything.

anyways. he's a little poem i wrote in my novel. enjoy. comment. tell me what you think.

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:iconmindbender:
~mindbender Nov 10, 2008, 5:19:37 PM
Hmmm have you ever tried writing without referencing yourself or your opponent directly?

--
"Physics is like sex: sure, it may give some practical results, but that's not why we do it." -- Richard P. Feynman
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Nov 11, 2008, 12:32:27 PM
I've probably tried. it's hard to detachment myself that way.
(although this poem is not about me but the characters in my story)

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:icondaige:
~Daige Nov 11, 2008, 2:54:28 PM
i like it! :D

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Daige
:glomp::hug:
A penny for your thoughts, a nickel for a kiss and a dime if you tell me you love me.
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Nov 11, 2008, 4:34:53 PM
thank you

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:icondaige:
~Daige Nov 12, 2008, 12:33:01 PM
youre welcome jackie :)

--
Daige
:glomp::hug:
A penny for your thoughts, a nickel for a kiss and a dime if you tell me you love me.
:icontenpikino:
~Tenpikino Jun 1, 2009, 6:50:30 AM
National Novel Writing? What a great idea, that's my November sorted out.

--
Oh, then, at such deceitful art,
Tears, real and burning, from my lids would start,
And peace would burn into my heart.
-Variations on a Time Theme, Edwin Muir
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Jun 1, 2009, 3:44:11 PM
:D good luck! it's a lot of fun!

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:iconmoondrunk:
*moondrunk Sep 19, 2009, 1:34:46 AM
why haven't you been posting in a while?
I want to see how far you have stretched your voice
past yesterday, i hope?

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Sep 20, 2009, 8:35:39 AM
i hope i have stretched my voice to vibrant, to loud, past whispers and silence.

Ive been rather busy with college. Besides working on a novel (ish) during national novel writing month, which is still unfinished and abandoned, i haven't done much at all.
It seems my muse has yet to visit me. I have urges to write, to draw, but i see the blank pages and i freeze up. i wish i had some push.

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
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